So I wrote this story four years ago when I was thirteen. Can you guys read it and tell me if you think I should continue it or not? if its good or bad? what I can improve? Thanks.
Seth was sitting on the wooden floor of his bedroom, knees to his chest, hearing his mother weep from the first floor, feeling the freezing wind slip through the cracked window pane opposite his bed, when the demon appeared.
Seth was not scared, for he had been visited by this pa... read more